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Unread 01-05-2010, 12:05 PM
stroutman81 stroutman81 is offline
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Glad to see you writing this, Lyle.

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You can contrast that to successful bodybuilders who often have some of the most beautiful technique you’ll ever see (they also often have total crap technique).
This sentence sort of went over my head. I don't know if it was the point you made in parenthesis or if it was the fact you went from this sentence write into talking about olympic lifting.

It could just be me. Actually probably is. But definitely need to add an "s" at the end of the word bodybuilder.

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at some point the gear/raw question comes up as well
Add an "s" at the end of come.

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Rather, the differences will start to become more manifest once trainees get out of the pure beginner stage of training and start moving into more involved and focused training as an intermediate level trainee.
"begin to manifest" maybe?
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